This page is for discussion of Scene one things such as: Jokes (are they suitable or even funny), It's place in the plot, suggestions that you don't want to put into the scene directly, also if you take something out and are worried others might want it put back in you can paste the text in here temporarily. You might want to sign your comments.
Maybe in this page when you aren't replying to a comment you might want to add it to the top of the page so older comments get pushed down
JamesB: Thanks to Diabolical we have a scene one, So glad someone jumped in. So far it's a bit short and very American themed. Getting the audience to be the Grass is a touch of genius though, this could easily be a running theme. I really don't get the Wheelie bin bit at the end does anyone else?
Jam..'the wheel within the wheel' was a line from a 60/70's poptastic hippy classis. LC
DiAbolical here - 'fraid I had been watching the original while imbibing can of £2.10 local Rignes beer.
as an aside, you can see the film on tv-links.co.uk - great!
Nice idea David … we need to get down to this … great to see you in Weston … add a chunk of stuff.. we need it Vic
